Abandoned places

Abandoned Places writing

Our learning goals are to:

-write a description, using powerful words and phrases

-include some Te Reo Māori

-carefully check that our sentences make sense and have correct punctuation and spelling.

Choose one of the images to prompt a piece of descriptive writing

My Abandoned Places Writing

I climb out of my 1410 Kitty Hawk. I put on my radio signal backpack and grab my 23kg first-aid
kit  and run out into the dark moist forest full of big tall evergreen pine trees. Marking the ground
I rush through the bushes and through the long trees stumbling over the long twisted tree roots.
I try to stay as quiet as possible because I know that the enemy is lurking around here. I can
still hear  EU 5651 Apaches above me scanning the ground for any signs of the enemy. 

Then all of a sudden SMASH, BOOM, CRASH!!! One of the EU 5651 Apaches comes tumbling
out of the sky and crashes through the thick tall trees. It is on fire and thick black oil is trickling
out of the nose of the helicopter. The windshield is smashed and the whole helicopter is dented
and damaged. Then BANG!!, BANG!!, BANG!! I can hear the noise of gunshots. My heart is
pounding out of my chest. Suddenly I saw the kakariki green bushes start moving and out of
nowhere.

 Two panzer army tanks drive right out of the bush. I start shooting the tanks but it is useless it
only makes one tiny bullet hole so I grab a grenade from my gun strap and climb up onto the
tank. I open up the hatch and use all my force to chuck the 11kg grenade into the hatch. The
driver and the gunner both jump out in fear. They both aim guns at me then all of a sudden a
douglas dc3 flies above me and drops a huge cylinder shaped object. At that moment I realize that it’s a bomb and run for my life but I feel a sharp object fly and hit my back. The two people yell “OI!!! COME BACK ER” I yell “NO!!!” but I soon regret saying that because they yelled “IF I AM GONNA DIE THEN YOU ARE COMING DOWN WITH ME”. They both hold up guns and grab my arm. But I hastily jump before the bomb hits I feel a strong gust of thick smoke and wind hit my back. I can feel tiny shards of rock, metal and wood fly past my back. However I suffer bad smoke and gas inhalation so I quickly grab a gas mask that is dangling from my neck and put it on as fast as possible. I try to escape the burning gas and radiation. 

Then just out of the corner of my eye I see a crumbling brick building covered in moss. I see it and rush in to it as the planes soar above me dropping bombs and as the army tanks drive past me through the thick fudgy soil. I can still hear the machine guns shooting rapidly in the distance. Suddenly I hear the ground rumbling and the old building starts to shake with bricks crumbling off. Then a colossal sized army tank drives straight into the old building sending it smashing into pieces I get blasted and I fall over only to find a huge green army tank driving straight over me but I'm still alive. I quickly crouch down under the tank luckily I'm not injured. So I grab a land mine and place it under the tank. I run for my life I hear a deafening roar in the distance behind me. I keep on running until I reach the end of the wet, cold, damp, pango black forest. I burst out of the bushes and meet my team at the port. There is an aircraft carrier waiting for me there I jump onto the aircraft carrier and run across the floating runway and climb into a spitfire then I disappear off into the kikorangi blue sky...    

Making a Paper Plane

Hi, today I researched how to make a paper plane. I have made a presentation of the instructions. When you have had a go, let me know how your plane flew, and maybe send me a photo. Smart Blogging.

My Scratch Project

Task: create a simple animation using scratch that teaches people some of our phrases of the week - Korero o te wiki.

WALT:

-use scratch to code for computational thinking
-learn how to create basic code on scratch
-say basic phrases in Te Reo Maori

Click here to see our Korero o te Wiki-
Phrases of the week.

See my scratch project below

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My Marae Recount

       My Marae Recount

In Term two, week one, 1-2 of May, my class and I went on a field trip to our local marae at Arahura. We were going to the marae because we wanted to learn all about the Māori culture.

Finding Greenstone

 We were going to go down to the river to find greenstone\Pounamu as one of our first activities on our marae trip. We headed off down the street. It was an extremely steep and straight street, I nearly fell over a few times. As I was walking down the street it was very slippery; as slippery as ice because of all the dew and frost from the morning. We arrived at a small clearing on the bank of the river. It was next to a long industrial concrete bridge. We had to walk through a short gorsy track through some trees and shrubs. It was very muddy and slippery  and I cut my leg in the process of walking down to the river. We arrived under the bridge and we had to walk through a sequence of streams in order to get to the other side of the bridge. It was very rocky and the river did not have much sand. Where there was sand it had a random gooey substance. I was searching up and down the river eager to find some greenstone. Not many people were having much luck in finding greenstone, then just when I thought I was not going to find any my hopes raised when I found a huge piece glistening in the sunlight in a crystal clear stream. At first I thought it was not greenstone\Pounamu and it was just a green rock but I picked it up. It must have weighed over 6kgs because it was very heavy. I carried it over to Jerry ( an expert at finding greenstone ) and he said it was a genuine piece of greenstone\Pounamu. I continued searching up and down the river keeping my eyes peeled, in the end I did not find a second piece. Eventually we headed back up the steep hill to the marae.





Sports Game

As the night creeped over the sky we did a rotation activity with a choice of tukutuku panels, soap carving, a game and  weaving. I did a sports game first. It was fun because we were constantly running. I tripped over a few times. We did a hockey game it was a game where you were given a number and you had a partner from another team that has the same number. When your number is called out you and the person with the same number from the other team run out and you grab a makeshift hockey stick each. You had to prevent the ball from getting into your goal while your trying to get the ball in your opponents goal. Then when we had our rotation I swapped round to soap carving. It was very messy. While everyone was making beautiful carvings I was just cutting out roughly a huge hole through my soap. I was making such a mess that the table was covered from top to bottom in soap crumbs!.


The next day we got in the car. We were going to do a walk around lake Mahinapua. On the way Hamish, who was traveling in the same car as me, put a pillow case on his head and pretended he was kidnapped. He tapped on the window and faintly said, “Help I've been kidnapped.” Whenever a car came he would do his act by tapping on the window with the pillow case on his head but all of a sudden we saw a police car in the distance. If the police officer saw Hamish pretending to be kidnapped the police officer would have taken it seriously. We stopped off  at the start of the walk.  There was a historic rail car off a bush locomotive. I got into a group of four  and we were running through the track. We reached the end of the track after going through a series of muddy puddles. I slipped over on slippery wet tree roots a few times. We stopped at a clearing at the end of the track with a small view of the lake. We listened to a maori story from ancient maori culture and had a snack. Then we headed back. Shannon, Flynn, Cameron,  Aiden and me pretended it was world war 2 and we pretended to shoot the Germans and the German army tanks. Then we reached the end of the walk. 

I really enjoyed my stay at the marae and I thank all the caretakers who work there. 

Photos are on the page below 



         



  

My Quote Art

Recently we have been doing some quote art. We used pastel to make a pastel version of our real face. We had to add a background behind our artwork face. Next we had to write an inspirational quote that we believe in. On the above shown is my art work.

If I had wings...

For the past few weeks we have been doing poetry. This weeks task was a poem about if I had wings... First we had to answer some questions and then we had to colour in the piece of paper with  the poem. Last of all we had to write our own if I had wings poem. We had to use sticky ( interesting ) language, use the five senses and use interesting verbs and nouns. Here is my poem.