EAsttle Persuasive Writing - is music better than sport
My writing is about an argument to do with either sport or music is better. I think music and sport are both good because they both are great for your health physically and mentally. Firstly, sport is good because it helps your fitness and it also can occupy your time and is a fun activity to do. Sport has a range of choices: from soccer to mountain biking, sports can keep you well and healthy. If you do sports a lot of your life it can help make you live longer because if you are not outside you will not get vitamin d (sunlight) and if you do not do some type of physical activity you will become unfit and you could get overweight. Sport also could be a good career for you if you like sports and you could be a famous sports star.
Music is also a good thing to occupy your time with because you can learn how to play a musical instrument and when you learn to play for example a guitar then you can play a violin because you can read the same music notes but just a different method for playing the device. Music can also help take your mind off something traumatising. Music can also help your brain make your memory stronger and increase your skill of music. Music could be a good career option because you could be a famous singer of a famous DJ.
Hi Charlie, well you certainly have convinced me on the merits of both playing a musical instrument as well as the need to be active! Great examples of persuasive writing. I come away from reading your text thinking that it is good to be involved in both music as well as sport because they will both be of benefit to my health both physically and emotionally. I like how you write that music can be a good outlet if you are going through challenging times. How true this is. I know that you recognize the merit of physical activity because you are involved in many activities. Maybe one day you would like to learn to play the piano?! The sun is finally out in Greymouth so best I venture outside to get a dose of vitamin D. Kei te mahi koe i nga mahi nui you are producing great work Charlie. Mum.
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