Monday 1 April 2019
If I had wings...
For the past few weeks we have been doing poetry. This weeks task was a poem about if I had wings... First we had to answer some questions and then we had to colour in the piece of paper with the poem. Last of all we had to write our own if I had wings poem. We had to use sticky ( interesting ) language, use the five senses and use interesting verbs and nouns. Here is my poem.
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Wow what a beautiful 'If I Had Wings' poem you have written Charlie.
ReplyDeleteLike we discussed you definitely put lots of effort into the vocabulary you used and ideas. These were great and show great imagination too. When we proof read and edited your work we quickly realised the area you need to work on is punctuation. See if you can improve on this in your next piece of writing.
I love the idea of flying past all the rusty space junk. Great writing Charlie.
Hi Charlie, what a FABULOUS piece of poetry. As I read it I am taken on such an exciting adventure with you. I particularly enjoyed the verse about the clouds and it reminded me of the airplane trip we took together to Wellington on Saturday. On our descent we looked out the window and were amazed at the incredible thick layer of what it seemed like infinite cloud cover. So fluffy, cotton wool, candy floss like.
ReplyDeleteCharlie,I love that I have the opportunity to be part of your blog. It’s always exciting when I receive mail alerting me to new material you have posted.
Arohanui Robyn (Mum).
Wow Charlie! This is amazing I love all the repetition and the way you have used many international aspects to make it more interesting! My favourite stanza is the last one where you talk about watching the sun set and night crawling in that was very poetic and excellently descriptive! Keep up the good work from Victoria xx
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