While reading your poem I felt as though the great white shark was near me, eyeing me up as its next meal. Your poem creates powerful images when you read it. This is top quality writing. Next time maybe try to find a way to enable words to stand out clearly and don't get lost in the background colour. This is called contrast. Possibly have a darker font over the lighter background. Your words are so good they deserve to be able to be seen clearly. I love your work.
While reading your poem I felt as though the great white shark was near me, eyeing me up as its next meal. Your poem creates powerful images when you read it. This is top quality writing. Next time maybe try to find a way to enable words to stand out clearly and don't get lost in the background colour. This is called contrast. Possibly have a darker font over the lighter background. Your words are so good they deserve to be able to be seen clearly. I love your work.
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