Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Monday, 1 November 2021

Thursday, 13 August 2020

Thursday, 25 June 2020

The Adventurer Jones

I sliced through the bush cutting vines and swishing them to the side with the help of my trusty machete I could tell I was nearing the end of the bush as it was getting drier and drier then as soon as I thought I would make it out alive I felt the feel of something coiling around my leg.

At first I thought it was a vine but, when I looked down I was shocked to see that it was in fact a snake. As quick as a flash I grabbed it with my bare hands and threw it at a nearby tree. I picked it up once again and swung it. Then I crushed its neck as hard as I could squeezing out every last drop of venom into my mouth.

As I was very thirsty after being in the bush for days. I would have drunken some creek water yet, it was crocodile infested. I threw the snake up into the air and sliced it apart and ran I ran as fast as I could but then, just as I thought I would make it out of the bush and win the competition, I heard growling behind me “GRRRRR” I looked behind me to see a giant big brown bear staring right at me.

 I jolted at the sight but I knew what to do. I sprinted to the closest tree and scaled it like a monkey. I knew that the bear was hungry. I found a beehive in the tree. I plucked it out and bees went swarming everywhere stinging me as I swatted them with my mini axe.

Then the queen bee flew out barding me with its stinger. Immediately I threw the hive down at the bear and it burst open on the ground the sticky sweet honey splattering everywhere this was my chance the bear fell down onto its arms and knees and licked up all every drop there was.

I slid down the tree trunk and dashed to the end of the forest. Leaping out of the bush. “And the winner is:, Jones the fearless explorer” he said as he handed the giant golden cup to me. The crowd went wild “so sir what is my prize” I asked the announcer. “Oh and the prize is:, he said over the microphone an all expense paid trip to: New Zealand” I thought to myself well I might as well go to see what nature is like.

 “Ah so we are approaching the ah Beautiful city of ah Auckland ah we will land ah shortly ah” uh why didn't I just swim I thought to myself I would love to fight the sharks sadly I have to take this lazy method of travel, I thought to myself. As we landed on the runway before the plane even stopped I opened the locked door, then jumped out nearly hitting a giant plane landing behind me on the runway.

 I ran out of the airport and sprinted across the streets and into the bush after several hours of walking I decided to go back as there were no challenges “where are the moose, the bear, the scorpions, the snakes, the giant poisonous spiders and the crocodiles as I was going back I heard rustling in the bushes behind me I got my whip out just in case I was preparing then a bunny jumped out.

 Uhhh I thought to myself as the bunny was running away “BANG” I heard a gunshot the bunny fell to the ground and a man wearing a long camouflage jacket holding a rifle picked up the bunny and walked away another few hours past by and I heard more rustling in the bushes I pulled out my revolver in case. It was just a wild deer but it kicked me pushing me into a pile of dirt which ants came out and started to sting and bite me.

“OUCH OWWW!” I said as I fell backwards into a river of the current of the water pushing me into hard sharp rocks. With that long black sleek looking eels crossed over me and bit deep into my flesh feeling the pain I jumped up high into the air and fell down a deep waterfall and down into the river below it.
“AHHHH!!!” I shrieked as I hit the sand hard on the ground. I felt a wriggling feeling in my bite and sting wounds I looked to and to my surprise I saw maggots infesting deep into my deep cuts.


 I jumped out of the water freezing, bleeding and bruised. I limped along lugging my numb legs behind me. I heard yet another gunshot: “BANG!” I froze in solid my tracks. I turned around to see four people behind me holding guns. This they were pointing at me “DON'T MOVE AND YOU WON'T GET HURT!” one said. Despite the constant pain of my body I could still move “THIS IS OUR LAND BOY!!!!” one said in an American accent. “Okay then” I said.

I jumped up once again scaling a tree then I ran along the tree tops. However I missed one jump and fell through the branches and back onto the ground “I'M AFRAID TO TELL YOU THAT YOU HAVE GOT YOURSELF INTO ONE STICKY SITUATION, AIN'T THAT RIGHT CLEETUS!” said the American one. “YES SIR!!” another American accent one said. “not for long I said” I banged one of their heads into the other, knocking two of them out. “OH MY” one said. I grabbed a grip of another and spun him around twirling and twirling. I let go, sending him flying far out into the ocean. The last one threw his rifle far out into the ocean and ran away screaming like a girl.

“Well then I thought” “ the New Zealand bush is far more dangerous than I thought”. “Time to make my way back home”. With that he jumped into the ocean and began swimming back to Australia. Along with five grey fins following him.           

Friday, 12 June 2020

Friday, 17 April 2020

Tuesday, 10 December 2019

Taku Mokai

Recently in our classroom we have been learning how to introduce our pets in Te Reo Maori. Because we have a pet day coming up.  

Friday, 15 November 2019

EAsttle Persuasive Writing - is music better than sport

My writing is about an argument to do with either sport or music is better. I think music and sport are both good because they both are great for your health physically and mentally. Firstly, sport is good because it helps your fitness and it also can occupy your time and is a fun activity to do. Sport has a range of choices: from soccer to mountain biking, sports can keep you well and healthy. If you do sports a lot of your life it can help make you live longer because if you are not outside you will not get vitamin d (sunlight) and if you do not do some type of physical activity you will become unfit and you could get overweight. Sport also could be a good career for you if you like sports and you could be a famous sports star.



Music is also a good thing to occupy your time with because you can learn how to play a musical instrument and when you learn to play for example a guitar then you can play a violin because you can read the same music notes but just a different method for playing the device. Music can also help take your mind off something traumatising. Music can also help your brain make your memory stronger and increase your skill of music. Music could be a good career option because you could be a famous singer of a famous DJ.

My Film Review On “The robber”



Today we went to the Toki Pounamu Film Festival. Each school made
little films. It was our first time doing this and it was held at the
Greymouth Regent Theatre. Below is my writing.

          My Film Review On “The robber”

My favourite mini- film was the first one. It was the one that was
about a robber and two sheriffs. At the first part of the film there was a
news report on how there was 2-million dollars stolen and that the
thief got away. On the second part of the film there was a high speed
pursuit between two sheriffs and the thief.

  There were four characters, two sheriffs, a news presenter, a thief and
a camera filming person. The makers of the film added in special
effects such as time lapse and slow motion. The film used props and
costumes. This film was very unique because it was not like the others.
The editing was smooth and I can see they put a lot of effort into this
film. The only problem was the fact that it was not related to the topic
as each film was meant to be about our local environment. However,
I found this film very entertaining.           

Wednesday, 28 August 2019

My Insect Writing.

Recently at school we have been working on a topic about insects and mini beasts. above is my work I have been doing.

Tuesday, 6 August 2019

The Break In

Hello my name is Charlie and I created this for a tech project for a senior rotation.

Friday, 26 July 2019

Abandoned places


Abandoned Places writing




Our learning goals are to:
-write a description, using powerful words and phrases
-include some Te Reo Māori

-carefully check that our sentences make sense and have correct punctuation and spelling.


Choose one of the images to prompt a piece of descriptive writing

My Abandoned Places Writing
I climb out of my 1410 Kitty Hawk. I put on my radio signal backpack and grab my 23kg first-aid
kit  and run out into the dark moist forest full of big tall evergreen pine trees. Marking the ground
I rush through the bushes and through the long trees stumbling over the long twisted tree roots.
I try to stay as quiet as possible because I know that the enemy is lurking around here. I can
still hear  EU 5651 Apaches above me scanning the ground for any signs of the enemy. 

Then all of a sudden SMASH, BOOM, CRASH!!! One of the EU 5651 Apaches comes tumbling
out of the sky and crashes through the thick tall trees. It is on fire and thick black oil is trickling
out of the nose of the helicopter. The windshield is smashed and the whole helicopter is dented
and damaged. Then BANG!!, BANG!!, BANG!! I can hear the noise of gunshots. My heart is
pounding out of my chest. Suddenly I saw the kakariki green bushes start moving and out of
nowhere.

 Two panzer army tanks drive right out of the bush. I start shooting the tanks but it is useless it
only makes one tiny bullet hole so I grab a grenade from my gun strap and climb up onto the
tank. I open up the hatch and use all my force to chuck the 11kg grenade into the hatch. The
driver and the gunner both jump out in fear. They both aim guns at me then all of a sudden a
douglas dc3 flies above me and drops a huge cylinder shaped object. At that moment I realize that it’s a bomb and run for my life but I feel a sharp object fly and hit my back. The two people yell “OI!!! COME BACK ER” I yell “NO!!!” but I soon regret saying that because they yelled “IF I AM GONNA DIE THEN YOU ARE COMING DOWN WITH ME”. They both hold up guns and grab my arm. But I hastily jump before the bomb hits I feel a strong gust of thick smoke and wind hit my back. I can feel tiny shards of rock, metal and wood fly past my back. However I suffer bad smoke and gas inhalation so I quickly grab a gas mask that is dangling from my neck and put it on as fast as possible. I try to escape the burning gas and radiation. 


Then just out of the corner of my eye I see a crumbling brick building covered in moss. I see it and rush in to it as the planes soar above me dropping bombs and as the army tanks drive past me through the thick fudgy soil. I can still hear the machine guns shooting rapidly in the distance. Suddenly I hear the ground rumbling and the old building starts to shake with bricks crumbling off. Then a colossal sized army tank drives straight into the old building sending it smashing into pieces I get blasted and I fall over only to find a huge green army tank driving straight over me but I'm still alive. I quickly crouch down under the tank luckily I'm not injured. So I grab a land mine and place it under the tank. I run for my life I hear a deafening roar in the distance behind me. I keep on running until I reach the end of the wet, cold, damp, pango black forest. I burst out of the bushes and meet my team at the port. There is an aircraft carrier waiting for me there I jump onto the aircraft carrier and run across the floating runway and climb into a spitfire then I disappear off into the kikorangi blue sky...    

Wednesday, 22 May 2019

My Marae Recount

       My Marae Recount

In Term two, week one, 1-2 of May, my class and I went on a field trip to our local marae at Arahura. We were going to the marae because we wanted to learn all about the Māori culture.

Finding Greenstone

 We were going to go down to the river to find greenstone\Pounamu as one of our first activities on our marae trip. We headed off down the street. It was an extremely steep and straight street, I nearly fell over a few times. As I was walking down the street it was very slippery; as slippery as ice because of all the dew and frost from the morning. We arrived at a small clearing on the bank of the river. It was next to a long industrial concrete bridge. We had to walk through a short gorsy track through some trees and shrubs. It was very muddy and slippery  and I cut my leg in the process of walking down to the river. We arrived under the bridge and we had to walk through a sequence of streams in order to get to the other side of the bridge. It was very rocky and the river did not have much sand. Where there was sand it had a random gooey substance. I was searching up and down the river eager to find some greenstone. Not many people were having much luck in finding greenstone, then just when I thought I was not going to find any my hopes raised when I found a huge piece glistening in the sunlight in a crystal clear stream. At first I thought it was not greenstone\Pounamu and it was just a green rock but I picked it up. It must have weighed over 6kgs because it was very heavy. I carried it over to Jerry ( an expert at finding greenstone ) and he said it was a genuine piece of greenstone\Pounamu. I continued searching up and down the river keeping my eyes peeled, in the end I did not find a second piece. Eventually we headed back up the steep hill to the marae.





Sports Game

As the night creeped over the sky we did a rotation activity with a choice of tukutuku panels, soap carving, a game and  weaving. I did a sports game first. It was fun because we were constantly running. I tripped over a few times. We did a hockey game it was a game where you were given a number and you had a partner from another team that has the same number. When your number is called out you and the person with the same number from the other team run out and you grab a makeshift hockey stick each. You had to prevent the ball from getting into your goal while your trying to get the ball in your opponents goal. Then when we had our rotation I swapped round to soap carving. It was very messy. While everyone was making beautiful carvings I was just cutting out roughly a huge hole through my soap. I was making such a mess that the table was covered from top to bottom in soap crumbs!.


The next day we got in the car. We were going to do a walk around lake Mahinapua. On the way Hamish, who was traveling in the same car as me, put a pillow case on his head and pretended he was kidnapped. He tapped on the window and faintly said, “Help I've been kidnapped.” Whenever a car came he would do his act by tapping on the window with the pillow case on his head but all of a sudden we saw a police car in the distance. If the police officer saw Hamish pretending to be kidnapped the police officer would have taken it seriously. We stopped off  at the start of the walk.  There was a historic rail car off a bush locomotive. I got into a group of four  and we were running through the track. We reached the end of the track after going through a series of muddy puddles. I slipped over on slippery wet tree roots a few times. We stopped at a clearing at the end of the track with a small view of the lake. We listened to a maori story from ancient maori culture and had a snack. Then we headed back. Shannon, Flynn, Cameron,  Aiden and me pretended it was world war 2 and we pretended to shoot the Germans and the German army tanks. Then we reached the end of the walk. 

I really enjoyed my stay at the marae and I thank all the caretakers who work there. 

Photos are on the page below