Charlie, I am very impressed by this work. The way you use action language of the soldiers makes it believable and realistic. Your poem reminds me of the recreated scenes we saw in the Dominion Museum WW1 display during our recent trip to Wellington. Well done this very special.
Kia ora Olivia I really like your comment. it reminded me of when I went to Tepapa in Wellington. Next time maybe fix up your mistakes because I found it hard to read some parts of your comment because there were words spelled incorrectly.
I have enjoyed looking through your blog, Charlie. I can see that you have a good understanding of place value, which is essential for success in mathematics. You have used images to show your understanding of the Kawa of Care, and I love the descriptive language you have used in both your poems. You are obviously working hard, Charlie. Something for next time: read through your work carefully before publishing to make sure your sentence punctuation is correct.
Charlie, I am very impressed by this work. The way you use action language of the soldiers makes it believable and realistic. Your poem reminds me of the recreated scenes we saw in the Dominion Museum WW1 display during our recent trip to Wellington. Well done this very special.
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Olivia I really like your comment. it reminded me of when I went to Tepapa in Wellington. Next time maybe fix up your mistakes because I found it hard to read some parts of your comment because there were words spelled incorrectly.
DeleteI have enjoyed looking through your blog, Charlie. I can see that you have a good understanding of place value, which is essential for success in mathematics. You have used images to show your understanding of the Kawa of Care, and I love the descriptive language you have used in both your poems. You are obviously working hard, Charlie.
ReplyDeleteSomething for next time: read through your work carefully before publishing to make sure your sentence punctuation is correct.